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Son's repayment
The grumpy man never took care of his son when he was a kid. Now that is old, his bitter son repay him by leaving him in a retirement home.
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Tom Islava
Ouch! That was harsh!
Ben Beaumont
Harsh! But a good animation, good work!
Victor Pierce
That's one of the more clever storylines I've seen! I also like the first character's reactions to the second one's dialogue. Nice job!
Shiloh Z. Vanaver
Animation is really nice. Felt the emotions of the characters. The staging and composition could be fixed up a bit, but I predict you get top 11 if not 3rd place. Good job!
cesar ramirez jr
I really like the face work. I think the younger man's body movement is a bit too constant/ repetitive, like he needs a nice pose to find and hold. The arm on the shoulder of the older man is good, it feels right.