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A Call Unwanted
by Ben Beaumont
none professionally. 2nd year visual effects student.
about 30 hours total.
A call from his tedious father.
Comments
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James Lyons
too much left hand movement
Jordan Smith
The character has too much useless movement that doesn't fit the scene
Zach Savaglio
Lip sinc is the only issue I see.
Will Kavukis
Great work! love the idea
Richard Adams
Overall, really nicely done. Just feels like too much hand movement; hands moving all over the place and feels a little too random. Needs to be a kind of rhythm, alternating between a moving hold and bursts of movement to emphasize certain words.
Marten Visser
Way too much acting I think. What he is doing with his arm feels not logical. Can be more subtle.
Kenneth Mayfield
excessive hand gestures
Ravi Mula
gud