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Unlucky Demon
Description
This is my unfinished entry for this month 11 sec chanllenge.
Comments
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Zach Savaglio
I wish that there was time for you to add some details! It seemed really good!
Gaethan Bracke
Nice animatic. I like the overall acting in it. Frames 191-238 are a bit unclear to me though. You could maybe have the second character look back over their shoulder while saying "it's a human insult" because right now neither of their faces are visible from the camera point of view. Nice drawing at frame 261 btw
Tom Islava
where's the lip movement on the cat?