« Back to April 2019 Competition
Did I actually say that?
Description
Nervous discussion with the boss
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Eric Bai
Love the subtle character traits!
Garry Cleaver
Very good, right hand looks awkward angle and don't get the eye thing at end, but enjoyed it.
Jamie F
Lipsync could use a polish
Ryan R.
I don't think him closing his eye and turning away was really necessary in the scene. I really liked the scene as a whole, but maybe towards the end you could have had him push himself towards the other speaker and past the briefcase, as if he is trying to get something out of this talk with what I assume is a boss or a teacher.