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Friendly Talk
Two friends met up and one of them starts taking pictures of him getting jealous. Wondering how he can look so calm and fresh.
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Mike M.
You have a lot of issues going on here. If you want to show environment, you need an establishing shot. And is the primary character playing peek-a-boo in the first second of the clip? I know he is taking a picture but it does not reflect that. And a usually a photographer does not talk while shooting pictures. He usually holds the camera down and talks. That is Hollywood myth. Also, the space between the two characters are a good distance, and at the second cut, they are nearly atop of themselves. Then the last five seconds of the clip, you have a blinking character. Try playing the clip in silence. Does it make sense to you? You rushed this one. Slow down, take your time, you can do better.
Juan Garcia
Lipsync could be improved