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Unexpected Turn

by Brent Van Looveren

Final Rating: 3.01. Finished #186 out of 228 entries.

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Experience

Nearly one year as a student at DAE Howest

Time Taken

About 15-20 hours

Description

A man gets carried away by a hot air balloon.

Comments

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Noah Nies

Good start. It's a little difficult for me to interpret what's happening visually because the characters' movement are pretty subtle for how far away the camera is to the action. We lose a lot of the expression and lip sync you did. I see the effort tough, and I think some easy fixes would remedy most of that. I promise, a closer shot panning out into this when the balloon starts moving would let you show off your hard work. Still, great job.

Nathaniel Vaughan

Would've liked to have been closer to the characters, perhaps added more camera angles.

Tyler Croteau

Good animations but adding more camera angles and lipsync would sell it to a professional.