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April Competition
Description
something that I worked on in april, very rough around the edges. wanted to upload something rather than nothing
Comments
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Nicholas Ballard
Ultimately, the staging would improve this piece by a lot. The characters just are not taking up much screen space and they are awkwardly cut off.
VAMSI TAMADA
side please
Elisabeth Janerka
Work on your composition and framing. The characters could easily be higher in frame and the horizon be most lower
Victor Fina 2
So far out you don see animation