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To be a Child

by Nathanael Brown

Final Rating: 2.46. Finished #218 out of 228 entries.

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Animator

Nathanael Brown

Experience

little experience

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

A man and his grandma are taking a walk in the city reminiscing of the old times when he was young. In which his grandma reminds him of what he has forgotten.

Comments

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Dave Roddick

Walk cycles are too in sync. Stagger them to make it more realistic.

Davi De Andrade

The walking could be smoother and cleaner, the lip syncing could be better. And the arms of the character on the right could move instead of just having it stuck there.

I did like that little hand gesture from the character on the left, to me it was funny