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给个机会
by LSY
Description
This is my semester assignment.Please give me some guidance,Thank you very much！I will listen carefully～～
Comments
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Jed B.
Shoot some reference and use that as inspiration for how your characters act and move.
Dave Roddick
The actions don't seem to fit what they are saying.
Aaron Clement
Too many poses and a bit twiny. I like the idea.
Victor Fina 2
Body animation doesn't convey the dialogue
Hannah Cao
I think you have some nice key poses, but the characters move waay too much to be believable! Consider the weight of the arms as they're swinging around and how that shows in the animation with anticipation, follow through, etc.