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To Be a Child
by Don Kim
I wanted to make contrast between the two characters.
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Carlos Guadarrama
This one's really good, if you're going for the old look I'd change the framerate to something like 13fps (Chaplin)
bhanu g
enjoyed the animation on the character screen right . very fun to look at . Also , the screen left guy's steps seem a bit awkward..is that done intentionally? if he has some discomfort walking then its not reading clearly right now
Alex Spenny
The idea is interesting. The animation still needs some work. Consider dropping the filter or changing up the perspective of the shot. It's a bit dark and I feel like the camera could be pushed in a bit more.
Ajinkya Deshpande
nice
Jed B.
The mouse is good.