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Childhood
by Rohit Jagtap
Description
A man talking to his uncle while walking on the empty street after the dinner.
Comments
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Alex Spenny
The animation needs a lot more work, from body mechs to facial animation, but the intentions are clear. The character designs and set dressing make the idea clear. The last shot being from behind the characters is jarring and doesn't add to any ideas (look up the cinematic 180 degree rule). Keep it from the front. Find ways to reduce the amount of cuts. Keep practicing!
Aaron Clement
Great! Lip sync needs work.