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April Competiton

by Chris

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished #182 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Chris

Experience

starting

Time Taken

three weeks

Description

Decided to give animation a try and used the competition as a starting point for inpsiration

Comments

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Antoine Desnoyers

floaty

Garrett Evans

everything is very floaty in your animation. working on in-betweens would benefit you a lot.

Simon Côté

It needs more fluidity in the movements ;)

eddyiv

The movements are kind of static at times, put inbetween frames to make them feel more lively.

Foxy

I'd recommend practicing some of your animation fundamentals before jumping into something as complex as a two-person dialogue!

Zachary Lussier

I think you have to improve your animation in general in mouvement and facials.

Éloise Valiquette

You should work on the fluidity of your animation, it is still way too stiff. they move like robots.

Anthony Abou Rezk

I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!