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PRYING EYES

by Fletcher Spence

Final Rating: 6.39. Finished #12 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Fletcher Spence

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

A brother tries to steal and read his little sister's diary.

Comments

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eddyiv

The animation is really well done, the face and the subtle movements made the whole thing pleasant to watch

Éloise Valiquette

I like your animation it's very fluid and the lipsync is really not bad!

Simon Côté

very fluid and very good lipsync :)

Zachary Lussier

I really like your animation. Great work !

Foxy

It feels a little odd to me that the child-like voice is coming from what looks like a teenager or young adult. It also doesn't seem to quite fit that her face and gestures appear to be angry and annoyed throughout. I like the idea of her secretly snatching his book though!

Anthony Abou Rezk

The animation looks pretty smooth, and I like the twist at the end, the staging makes it pretty clear so good job on that!