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You Only Spy Twice
by Terje Monsen
A girl talking to a security officer.
Comments
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Éloise Valiquette
I really like the animation of the child, it is very well done, but I think that the man's face is too still and his jump is very and unnatural, it might be necessary to review his animation with a reference !
Zachary Lussier
Wow just wow nothing to say Great work !
eddyiv
The animation is pretty good! The poses felt kinda stiff tho.
Simon Côté
the movements are pretty slow but great staging :)
Foxy
Hey there! I'd recommend working on some stronger posing for your characters. Right now they're just sort of sitting square-on with the camera, and not moving much as they talk. I'd start with more natural sitting poses, and try to choose some key acting poses throughout the dialogue.
Anthony Abou Rezk
It's good! It's pretty clear and has a funny ending, try and make the poses a little more interesting and work on the lip-sync to make it better. Anyway, good job to you!