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A girl talking to a spy !
i didn't animate a lot of things before, it's one off my first
Approximatly 1 month
That animation is a normal discussion between a normal girl and an advance spy who talk at the cellphone. They talk on a road, where he have an abandon house. Enjoy my little animation !
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Emmelyn
Good effort with the pantomiming! I would suggest making the movements snappier and more direct, moving more with purpose instead of flailing and sliding around.
Zachary Lussier
It's mine so i will not rate it ;-)
Levy Van Malder
the flow of the kid (arms and legs) are all doing something at the same time making it difficult to read the pose.
Éloise Valiquette
I find that your characters move a little too much and we disturb the clarity of the animation a little! On the other hand, well done for your fluidity of animation!
eddyiv
Pretty nice! I feel like keeping static poses for abit longer could make it better.
Simon Côté
good lipsync :)
Anthony Abou Rezk
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!