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pavni_11sec_project
by Pavni Narang
i m pavni narang. it is my 3d animation.
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munish
very nice work,.
Ishika birwal
fanstastic
Deepak
Nice work
Parvinder
Very nice attempt
Emmelyn
Sadly you can't see her face for most of what she's saying, but overall the animation and acting is good!
balkrishan
very nice work
Aditya Raj Chaudhary
The animation was great
Rider
very nice viedo
Foxy
It's not a bad start. It would be better if we could see the girl's face as she's talking. The slowly rotating camera feels a bit unnecessary.
Éloise Valiquette
Your animation is really good! I like what the camera movement brings to the animation!
eddyiv
Pretty nice animation!
Simon Côté
great fluidity :)
Zachary Lussier
The fact they were staying face down during the animation make the feeling you don't want to let us see the facials, i think focusing on facials instead of the scene can be better. Good animation overall
Anthony Abou Rezk
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!