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When I Grow Up
by Evan Marquez
11 second animation
Comments
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Emmelyn
Interesting that it's a tiny child. The only reason I picked up on that is because of the dead fly next to him. A wide or establishing shot would help give the viewer context to what is going on. I like the creativity put toward this though!
Éloise Valiquette
Your animation struck me as weird at first because I couldn't understand why one of the characters' heads was so big, but it was a good idea of you to put a fly. Once I saw it I understood the size difference! I think you could make your character's movements in red a bit smoother to reduce the blocking effect of your animation.
eddyiv
The animations are kinda choppy
Foxy
I'm not really sure what's going on in this scene, and it looks like maybe we're flipping back and forth across the 180 line which is also very jarring. I'd work on trying to communicate your idea better in the future.
Zachary Lussier
I don't understand the funny part of your animation, but i like what i have see
Simon Côté
orignial :)
Anthony Abou Rezk
I love this 2D animation, A lot of parts are very still, which makes it look a lot more bland than it actually is, with a bit more time you could have made something great!





