« Back to April 2021 Competition

Crouching down

by Joel Dunn

Final Rating: 4.23. Finished #112 out of 195 entries.

0 views

Animator

Joel Dunn

Experience

Currently a animation student, started studying in2020

Time Taken

12 hours

Description

Two characters crouch around an entrance to sneak and spy on who's inside. And eventually, start scoffing at each other.

Tags
2D

Comments

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Éloise Valiquette

Your animation could have been done a little more aesthetically to give it a more finished style. For lipsync, the movement of the mouth seems a bit too exaggerated to me. Also the position of the character in front is a bit strange, maybe taking a photo in this reference could help!

eddyiv

The mouth feels abit too exaggerated at times

Simon Côté

great lipsync ! And the animation is very fluid :)

Zachary Lussier

I find the character design a little bit to simple, but i like the animation in general.

Anthony Abou Rezk

I like this 2D animation, it's a little simple and is missing some smootheness, but with a bit more time you could have made something great!