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Don't believe me?

by Melody Dickens

Final Rating: 5.39. Finished #43 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Melody Dickens

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

First submission to 11 second club hope you guys like it.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Antoine Desnoyers

Great appeal!

Cielo Greenstreet

Cool! I really like the character poses, although I think each character could've used a little more movement overall. Like around frame 43, maybe the man could bend upwards, or even look around in reaction to the kid saying "Wait!". Or maybe even something more simple such as adding delay on the arm movements. Anyway, you did pretty well for the time allotted. Good job!

Zachary Lussier

I think the spy expression is not here and the bodies feels a bit statics. Overall good job !

Simon Côté

great staging and really good lipsync :)

eddyiv

The movements feel like they need abit more frames

Éloise Valiquette

Your animation is good and looks good! It's fluid, the lipsync seems good to me and aesthetically it does not look bad at all!

Anthony Abou Rezk

Wow! This one is cool, you don't always see 2D in these competitions, so it's fun when you spot them. Good job on keeping the characters so what consistent, I just feel like some parts miss a little life, because you kept them still for a few frames, I think that if you changed those drawings and added movement, it would change a lot. Anyway, good job!