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A Spy on the Wall
Third year at Animation School
on and off for 3 weeks
A young girl meets with the spy that is scaling her apartment building
Comments
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Brittany H. Simpson
Nice movements and character designs. The only critique I have is that the rope disappears. Awesome job.
Zachary Lussier
Like the girl attitude, but the guy feel a little bit off. Even if you send a wip, it's pretty good actualy!
ro crown
Great direction that is clear and consise for the audience.
Simon Côté
i like that sketchy style :)
Éloise Valiquette
Interesting animation of which I would like to see a final version! I like the animation of the girl's hair good fluidity!
Chirag Aggarwal
The idea is really good
eddyiv
Cute idea and art style! I like the bounciness of the hair
Anthony Abou Rezk
Nice job! I love the girl's animation, it lookd really good, the character looks pretty much the same the whole time, and the poses are good, it would have been funny if she cut the rope at the end and we just saw him fall. Anyway, good job!
Foxy
Good effort! I'd work on your mouth shapes a little more. I'm not convinced that they're saying these words based on what their mouths are doing.