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Hi, this is my first time I participate at this contest and this is my work. I only work on the kid's voice, I do not have the time to do the men's voice... hope everyone enjoy :-)
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Zachary Lussier
i think you can improve your fluidity to make your animation a little bit less jerky. Continue to improve to be better.
Simon Côté
I can see a great potencial in this animation. If you have worked a little more on the speed of the movements it would be better! Greta work :)
Éloise Valiquette
The movements are a little weird and the starting poses are a little strange especially as it takes a moment before moving, it would have to be reworked!
eddyiv
The walking seems kind of odd and i feel like the rest of the body should move abit more.
Foxy
Not sure why she's frozen stiff at the beginning of the animation? Also sounds weird hearing a child's voice coming from a character that looks very much like an adult.
Anthony Abou Rezk
Good start, I feel like you tried to animate every single frame, which is why it looks like the characters popped into poses most of the time, maybe try putting less poses into it, and maybe it'll change it. Try to work on that and keep practicing!