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doubt
by Jeffrey
This was the final project for my animation class, apologies for the low quality, i hit some setbacks, but I was able to meet the deadline so I'm happy.
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Zachary Lussier
I think the fact your two characters are in wip make the animation less good and obviously the fact the woman is not shadded doesn't help. And on time, the audio kind a messy so check that. Continue to work and improve to be better.
Éloise Valiquette
Don't forget to remove everything from the Mayan interface when rendering. Your female character slips at the start of the animation and your character moves strangely during the animation, so be careful when changing the camera not to completely change your character to the side, it looks like she's talking to herself from frame 98
eddyiv
The movements feel kinda robotic.
Foxy
Careful with your camera cuts! It's very confusing.
Simon Côté
lipsync would be improved but good fluidity for the guy ;)
Anthony Abou Rezk
Good start! The poses are pretty nice, but the transitions aren't very smooth, so try and work on that. Also, if you animated the lower parts of the body, it would look a lot smoother. I think that with a little more work you could really improve this