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A Kid's Dream

by Divina Gracia

Final Rating: 3.43. Finished #169 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Divina Gracia

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

12 days

Description

This boy just think about being a spy when he's grow up later, but the adult he talked to is underestimate him.

Comments

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Levy Van Malder

lipsinc is off

Éloise Valiquette

You should review the lipsync of your animation, it is a bit too exaggerated and it makes the whole thing a little weird!

Foxy

Make sure to study your phonemes for some better lip sync!

eddyiv

The mouth movements feel offf and the character seems to constantly be moving.

Simon Côté

need to work on lipsync and timing ;)

Zachary Lussier

I think you need to improve in overall animation, both facials and mouvements.

Anthony Abou Rezk

Good! I think your lip-syncing is what need the most improvement, it's very distracting when it's not accurate, maybe think of it more as sounds than words, hope this helps!