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Outside a coffee shop

by Zaeem Ahmad

Final Rating: 3.67. Finished #156 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Zaeem Ahmad

Experience

2 months

Time Taken

1 day

Description

A chat outside a coffee shop between an uncle and his niece.

Comments

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Simon Côté

It would need more fluidity in the movements. But i like the staging :)

Éloise Valiquette

Beautiful decor, but be careful to remove all the elements of the Mayan interface in your animations

Zachary Lussier

The character are very static and moving the entire body will make your animation even better

eddyiv

The movement feel kinda robotic at times.

Anthony Abou Rezk

Good work, I like the setting and the emotions give, but the poses couold be a little better and more expressive, with more time and a better understanding of animation principles