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the wannabe spy

by Chanchal

Final Rating: 5.24. Finished #49 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Chanchal

Experience

I'm a student

Time Taken

20 days

Description

a determined kid being ignored by a spy as she narrates her dream to him.

Comments

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Aly

Super cute!

Simon Côté

the animation is fluid but the lipsync would be improved ;)

Éloise Valiquette

Watch out for the eyes of your male character, it looks like he's squinting as long as he rests his eyes in his book!

eddyiv

The man's movement when he says good luck with that seems kinda awkward

Zachary Lussier

Great job i really like the animation overall !

Foxy

This is a good start! To me, the characters feel very floaty. The man appears to be taking steps but he is not shifting his weight and his knees are popping a bunch. I'd practice some body mechanic exercises!

Anthony Abou Rezk

That was good! The animation is pretty smooth and the poses are nice, but one thing I notice is the eyes of the guy seem weird sometimes, other than that good job!