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The Pen
by Yigit Bayram
A very rough animation I did for April's theme.
Comments
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Antoine Desnoyers
I like the style, It feels a little bit to frozen to me. I would have like if the man had a reaction when seeing he's got solen
Simon Côté
I like the camera angle, but the perspective for the old man is a little bit weird. Overall its good !
Zachary Lussier
The spy feel too much static and the fact your animation feel incomplete make me think you miss time to do it. Sorry :-(
Éloise Valiquette
The lipsync from the animation part you did looks great, but I would love to see your full animation!
eddyiv
The animation needs more frames at times i feel, also the characters could use a bit more movement.
Anthony Abou Rezk
I love it! I didn't even notice the man had a pen at first, so maybe make it more clear if you tweak it, but the idea was really cool! The style is great and the characters look consistent, so good job to you, keep it up!
Divina Gracia
Boy's body seems missing in some frames...