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Young Spy

by Colleen Perusek

Final Rating: 5.92. Finished #24 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Colleen Perusek

Experience

Student

Time Taken

4 weeks

Description

A young girl explains her future career goals.

Comments

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Emmelyn

Animation is very fluid and poses are clear and exaggerated which is great! The only thing I would say to fix up would be her mouth, I think it just looks a little weird and moves too much overall since she's speaking so fast. The man is perfect!

Zachary Lussier

So good !!! WOW

eddyiv

The mouth is way too exaggerated in my opinion.

ammon parkman

girl lip sync too strong and the sound is off a few frames.

Foxy

There's a lot of really awkward posing happing with their spines in this, I'm not sure it's working too well. Their hand gestures are nicely animated though!

Éloise Valiquette

I really like your animation! I find the way you bend the child's back interesting, I have the impression that it makes his poses more expressive!

Simon Côté

great animation of the bodies but the facial expressions of the girl are too exagerated in my opinion ;)

Anthony Abou Rezk

This is good! I love the poses and the expressive actions, it make it all very clear and interesting.