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Feeling InSpyred
A little girl shares her dreams to a not so caring audience.
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Emmelyn
I love the expressions, especially the man's annoyance and the little girl saying, "When I grow up". Poses are clear and well-timed. I wish the camera was zoomed in more so we could see it more clearly, cuz I think there are a lot of details that are missed because it's so subtle and hard to see from far away. Nice work!!
Levy Van Malder
you could have set the shot closer, now you lose alot of the emotion
Simon Côté
I really like it! Camera placing would be better ;)
Zachary Lussier
Great animation, good job !
eddyiv
The animation was pretty good!
Éloise Valiquette
I think the camera could be a little closer to your characters so that we can see them a little better in this small format. Your animation seems smooth and good to me. I like the reactions of your characters!
Anthony Abou Rezk
Nice job! I like the setting, I just thing you should've put the camera a little closer to the characters, just so we can see them better, the animation is good, especially on the little girl, but some poses look a little stiff.
Foxy
I'd work on trying to find some more interesting poses to put the characters in for a better foundation. Right now they are very symmetrical and static. Most people don't sit/stand the way that the guy does. It would also help to zoom in the camera a little more so we can see the characters better as there is no reason for us to be this far away. Also maybe tone down the neon-green of your floor. It's a bit distracting.





