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Dinner_11_Second
This was a class assignment from my teacher Edward Bakshi at Nmsu.
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Simon Côté
the fluidity is interesting :)
eddyiv
the pulsating lines give the characters more life. pretty nice!
Foxy
Hey, not bad! I appreciate the posing you have here. The first thing I noticed is that it feels like there are too many camera cuts for such a short period of time. Maybe reduce those so we can focus on the characters more!
Éloise Valiquette
You should probably review your images again, your animation skips during the animation, it makes the image really twitchy. It makes your animation lose fluidity.
Zachary Lussier
I think the audio was badly made in your animation, but overall good animation start
Anthony Abou Rezk
I like this, it's funny, with a bit more time you could have made something great!