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Correctional Cook
Description
Mery just couldn't wait anymore for the jailor to open the food slot.
Comments
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David Ball
Gross but I love it
Maria
Very fun, meaning so wonderfully clear the second character isn't needed because we are asking the exact same thing. Lovely characterization on this lady.
Martin Miljkovic
Head movement at the start feels wrong. hanging sitting position is done well. Fingers are too open at the start (90). Watch what you do with fingers/hands overall. Movements are nice on body, rather well.
Some tapping on "bowl" to emphasize it could be nice.
Overall nice work.