« Back to April 2023 Competition
An Incident In Heaven
by Tan Jaclyn
A young girl with excellent grades has sadly passed away. She became a little angel and went to heaven. At the moment she is being evaluated and interviewed by God because she wants to enter the academy in heaven
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Ben Zingo
the camera change at 156 feels jarring- you are breaking the 180 rule, as well as having the hand/arm crossing in front of the girl's face
Anthony
Not terrible, some of the character movements are lifelike - others not so much. At no point do your characters ever look AT each other, which is strange since they are talking TO each other. Much of the lip sync is off. "Eight Schools" was well done, but that's about the only part that looked correct.