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Boarding School
by Anthony
Description
A school administrator admonishes a student on her first day.
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Anthony
I have a very awkward series of camera cuts from frame 58 to 84. I badly bumped my set and it wasn't recoverable. Beyond that, I introduced some additional camera moves with the spinning room. I also introduced some additional props. Overall, I'm satisfied, but it would have been better without the bad cuts at the beginning.
Michael D. Smith
Rotating money shot camera detracted from the animation. Clever medium.
Etienne Massot
I like the idea, but the camera is a bit disturbing here. I think the 180 degree turn confuse the clarity of the scene