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Them Witches
Emily tries for a new school
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Michael D. Smith
Great except for the lack of expression on the second character. Staring blankly with eyes wide open made him feel like a puppet rather than a living thing. The first character was great. The ESP apple grab at the end was great.
Ben Zingo
in the B camera shot, be careful of eye direction! She's kinda staring directly into camera, when she should be looking at the teacher.
Overall the body language is really nice, some of the mouth movement/lip sync seems a bit slow, or needs more dramatic/snappy easing between poses.
one or two more blinks or subtle eye movements might also help the eyes to feel more natural
Etienne Massot
love the acting