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Elsie & Gil
by Sophia Rigg
Description
A school official interviews a strangely knife - fidgety student about their past.
Comments
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Michael D. Smith
The motion and timing is all over the place. Focus on the flow and the emotional beats in the scene.
Tiffany Lounsbury
Great job on the knife motion/throwing. Love the under the leg toss.
Vicent Matoses
I like the style but perhaps some details are too exagerated