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The Troublemaker
by Melissa
I had trouble adding the background so I decided not to add it.
Comments
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Cortland Miller
The concept is good, the character movements are interesting, but the animation itself is a bit robotic.
Anthony
Not a whole lot of character movement, and lip sync needs a lot of work.
theByte
Good, but if I had to nail down a problem it would be the consistency of how everything is drawn? The left hand of the first character is really detailed but their hand holding the paper is just kind of a blob of flesh, and the second character doesn't even have fingers. Also, the way the first character is drawn makes it look like their lower body was cut in half.