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she crashed me
by ronda crom
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girl monster crashes school yard
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ronda crom
Four stars as I know it needs more inbetweens, and the adjustments in framing from the camera....and the repeat of the monster female walking is a bit much. A the teacher councelor is way to lip sync out of range to be too stiff ....but I shall imporve with putting in the proper amount of time for the next MAy entry.....gave a four stars to this.
Anthony
Um, what? I'll be nice and not say anything.





