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So, are we done?
by Esaúl Fabio
Description
I know it's not perfect, I didn't polish some details, there is some clipping, but I prefer to upload this than nothing.
I hope you like it :)
Comments
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ronda crom
Not sure the moving close-ups are are of vlalue to this story ....
Michael D. Smith
Probably too much zooming; too slow and gradual; sharper faster might be better. Not enough expression in the characters.