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Insubordinate, and Churlish
by Vincent Wang
An interview of a peculiar new student
Comments
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Anthony
The teachers movements are an odd mix of very fluid and rigid. Very nice walking and arm movement through frame 100 or so. The teacher's expressions of "eight schools" seem to suggest surprise that doesn't match the voice inflection of the dialogue.
Michael D. Smith
Incredible. Expressions were really good. Camera angles were strong. The timing was really impactful especially with how fast she flicked away the lollipop stick. Effective stage business with her sucking on the lollipop and the adult pushing the bowl slightly away.
Julian Dill
Needs a bit of work on the lip-sync, but otherwise, I think we may have a winner here!
Etienne Massot
I really like the first shot
AJM
Cool!





