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Elise can tell when her dad's mask is slipping, but Maksim tries to hide it from her (it never works).
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John Alston
I usually don't use the word "overanimation" but I think the animation uses too many extreme poses. That being said, it's fluid and adds good storytelling.
Jenna Liesman
Nice shot structure! In the first shot, some of the model's proportions shrink and grow in size a little. A bit on the hair, some on the head, tad on the shoulder. It's enough to be a bit distracting to the viewer.