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Lil girl playin FRP with her dad
by Şeyma Şahin
Little girl playing FRP with her dad and her dad’s character’s mental state is not looking well
Comments
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artchoke
Looks great, though few more in-betweens could've made it 10x better
John Alston
It feels like an animatic. The ending was interesting.
Katelyn Monnier
The animation as a whole is a good start, the composition is good and I think the acting works well! However, I think that the blur lines during the actions aren't needed. They aren't moving fast enough to justify that level of blur (the father raising his arm, the girl moving up her paper and then when she shakes her head). It is a little distracting and detracts from the animation overall. If you just had the action happen without the use of the blur/speed lines, then I think the work would flow much more smoothly.