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Not too Happy

by Rene

Final Rating: 6.73. Finished #12 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

Rene

Experience

5 years

Time Taken

about 2 weeks

Description

:)

Comments

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Ezra Allen

The grip on the shoulder is a bit unnatural. Maybe a light touch on the shoulder later in?

I think because of the model scale and him driving it doesn't work for me.

Nice subtle acing in this though good work. I like how he is still paying attention to the road nice natural touches.

Joshua

You've got the body movements down pretty good, it's just the faces that are pretty basic or bland.

Jonathan White

Fantastic animation and expressions. Some really subtle decisions that go a long way. His expression at the end is perfect. I do think the poses are too dramatic for someone in a car though.

Marin Elise

Amazing beautiful flawless. Mildly concerned about how long he looks away from the road

John Alston

I do think the lower lip should wrinkle more at the "not happy" part, but I believe the overall movement is well-composed and believable.