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Why, Why are you so concerned...
A dad and his daughter curl up for some tv and some heavy conversation.
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Ezra Allen
Bit drifty between frames. Try and tighten up your tweens. Don't let the eyes drift between boz eyed and wall eyed
Mary Shaw
I really like this a lot! I like the story telling in it. It's so cute! :D
John Alston
I think the animation is fine.
But I also think the laying is an excuse to not animate the daughter's hand movements, and I also think that this sort of position seems too skeevy, but I don't think that's the animator's intent.
Jenna Liesman
Solid stuff! There's moments in the girl's last line where her body movement is so buttery smooth that she's a little less believable.