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Hide and Seek :)
by Bee Murdock
sad rats in an alleyway
Comments
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Tykia Lumpkin
The beginning scene was a chef's kiss! Showing how wary and paranoid the father rat is in scouting for danger, and a love how scraggly his appearance is compared to his child's! Awesome animation! :))
artchoke
To me, the characters feel flat, due to the difference in shading of backgrounds and character, and the consistency of volume and perspective in the drawings
Despite that, your able to set a compelling atmosphere, and improving your perspective and volume will guarantee your next piece looks amazing!
Jonathan White
Great art style, I think the character designs could be improved, but I'm not sure how
John Alston
I think this might be the most "complete" scene depicted and with great staging.
Perhaps my only bit of advice is to try to figure out how to handle "jaggies" - I think these are inevitable for raster films, but perhaps there could be more anti-aliasing in later animations or in post.
Peggy Tsai
aesthetics and animation are both so good!
Michael D. Smith
Awesome work!





