April

Ian Grove

Nice work! Good job following the 180 rule while having pretty drastically different camera angles. I think the movement or gesture that feels best here to me is his head tilt at "anyway", it complements the question well.
One difficulty with the changing angles is that it felt to me like the two characters were suddenly a lot closer together when we see them from the side. Otherwise though I think you did well setting up the scene and its lights and colors.

Seth

not finished and i got flash banged but not bad

Biola Animation

The style in engaging. Technical difficulties lower the rating a bit—of these, the most distracting is the out of sync lip sync. We will be looking at the face, so if the lip sync is badly off it's hard not to notice.

John Alston

Okay, the strobe ending was the tiebreaker.

Lip sync is good, everything else -blah.

Jackson VonMinden

looking good! try to get out of the habit of scribbles though, scribble will hold you back