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Happy?
by Diego
Description
A girl and her strangely small ninja dad argue in a park
Comments
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John Alston
I guess these are schoolchildren playing "house."
The lip sync is exaggerated. Kudos for the creativity.
Biola Animation
Girl's posting is solid, but the posing for "dad" is unclear and doesn't tell us much. First shot camera move (pull out / reveal girl) is fine, third camera move (swing to the left over the girl's shoulder) is pointless / meaningless. Don't move the camera around just because you can.
Arjun anilkumar
Floating