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Coffee Fortune

by Yasemin Kutan

Final Rating: 3.85. Finished #105 out of 136 entries.

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Animator

Yasemin Kutan

Experience

Not a lot

Time Taken

15 hours

Description

Girl sad about coffee fortune

Tags
2D

Comments

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Mary Shaw

Maybe more mouth movement. But I like the character designs! :)

John Alston

Blinks are hard to do, and hard to do right, and I respect the animator for trying to incorporate it into the movement, but I think it is done too much.

I'll admit that I tend to have characters blink when I don't know what to do, but what I try to do is let the eyebrows lead.

I also think the girl's hair should bob a little when she talks, to sell the sort of mechanics/weight.

OliyideDemilade

The Characters are a bit stiff but apart from that its ok.