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You're Not Happy
I am currently an animation student with about two years of on-and-off experience in ToonBoom.
It took me about 52 hours, spread out across 28 days to complete this animation.
A single father confronts his frustrated child.
Comments
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Jonathan White
There's a lot of potential here, it just needs to be refined.
Marin Elise
Would have rated full stars, but I have some reservations about the consistency/continuity of where the characters, mostly the kid, are placed in space. She jumps from being somewhat in front of him, to further away, to right in front of his hand, to across the room, leading to a feeling of her teleporting around a bit. Animation is amazing though.
John Alston
"Film school good" - make of this what you will.
Annabelle Valkhoff
love the shots! great framing, really shows the dynamic between the characters - and great animation :D