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EXPRESSION !!!
by rashid
do not create problems, leave things alone..
Comments
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pluto
nice... personally i feel camera move was not required, and take care the head is not cut in the last frame.
Vanessa Gonzalez
Good animation in general, but the lip sync's timing is off, especially at the end.
James Van Dam
Watch where your character is in relation to the camera. Staging is a thing you need to consider before rendering.
Aaron Clement
Good posing. A bit linear.
Liviu Boar
too bad about the lip sync...
Ryan D Lowe
Good work here! Love the subtle "gripping" work you put in the hands.
Amartya Mukherji
not bad but could have been better..
Richard Clark
Up until frame 188...it seemed to be going fine but then the motion doesn't go anywhere from there. It just stays in the general location. I would have loved to see something different and more interesting. His motion pops at 140 and it looks like his left arm hyper extends from 132-140
Kyu-bo Choi
I think this shot needs a little more head room