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Don't look into in.....
by RAHUL SHARMA
After drink character could not tolerate any one's interference.....and when its all done... giving advice...
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Vanessa Gonzalez
Great animation! My only critique would be to sync his mouth better with the audio. It seems like the mouth shapes are correct except for the timing. For example, when he says "expression" I could hear the "p" before I saw his lips pronouncing it.
Aaron Clement
I did a gun shot, too. Love the creativity in this. Stands out from the others.
Jez
another smart drunk this time talking to a complete blackout drunk...good animation
Amartya Mukherji
There is scope for improvement. camera movement is not helping, remove it or smooth it down.
Jasmine Moody
Really liked it. Nice work!
Kartick Pramanik
NICE ANIMATION
PRIYA RANJAN DEB
ba ba, ki darun hoyeche.
Joyabrata Saha
camera can be lil slow i guess
Ryan D Lowe
Great acting beats here. Simple and powerful. The lip sync is your biggest opportunity.
Richard Clark
From 125-134; I would show more of a arc in the motion and it's too abrupt. Give an ease in and out on that. From 141-157; I would add a secondary rotation action here. I would not ease into the glass he's holding hitting the table around 186. I would let that hit harder.
Danny Kneip
The audio is amazing!
Eshan
Clean animation!