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Being Husband
by nabil
A husband's tale after commenting on his wife's recipe
Comments
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Vanessa Gonzalez
I think you could've given the older man a little more expression on his face; I'm not sure if he was disappointed or sad.
Sergio Candela Ramirez
If feel that both are very static...
[user]
needs allot more polish but nice set!
Ryan D Lowe
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
Aaron Clement
A bit floaty. Original.
Richard Clark
Wow! another "picking of the nose" piece...